And mine will look a bit more... lively. Interactive. Requiring less imagination to become animate. (But just as willing to scale walls.)
I'm participating in Sara Megibow's How to Hook an Agent with Your Query Letter webinar on Thursday (followed by personalized feedback from an agent on my Top Agent list--can't go wrong with that!).
Fingers crossed that my son and I both get our wish!
How's your writing/querying going?